とてもかわいいしですね。But I think it would have been helpful to provide the translation and the meanings of the poems. Since you have used lots of Kanji, it was kind of difficult to fully understand your poems. I like the first poem~ I think it's very clever to incorporate what you've experienced into your poem.
これはとてもきれいです。そして おもしろいです。Your poems are very expressive through your use of more complex word choice. While parts are difficult for me to read, the poems are beautifully written to allow for multiple interpretations.
とてもかわいいしですね。But I think it would have been helpful to provide the translation and the meanings of the poems. Since you have used lots of Kanji, it was kind of difficult to fully understand your poems. I like the first poem~ I think it's very clever to incorporate what you've experienced into your poem.
YanıtlaSilこれはとてもきれいです。そして おもしろいです。Your poems are very expressive through your use of more complex word choice. While parts are difficult for me to read, the poems are beautifully written to allow for multiple interpretations.
YanıtlaSilI like the titles of your poems, and the fact you reference how ラブにとてもあついです。Hope you enjoy my yorum. Also, いいかんじ！
YanıtlaSilすみません、かんじは わかりませんから、よみません。[Sorry, because I can't read kanji, I can't read this.]
YanıtlaSilうるぐさんのpoemはとてもおもしろいですよ！私はたんごがだいすきです！でもかんじはむずかしいよみましたね。
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